Saturday, April 25, 2009

A different morning


There was something different about the air that day.. It was unusually cool and it somehow felt very fresh. As Niku walked down the pavement, she felt as if her legs were carrying her by themselves.. she just couldn't feel any effort being put in. Morning wasn't her favourite time of the day, what with the alarm, the unbearable journey to work and the idea of a long day of hard work, but this morning was different. It felt like breeze blowing in her face.. and it wasn't only because she wasn't going to work today.


What lay in store for her? Was he going to say something.. say something special? It couldn't be.. she had known him for quite a while now - he was a nice guy, decent and cheerful - but they were always friends. But then again, she was attractive and single, and so was he.


The red skirt in the display window of 'Bold' caught her eye. She wished she were wearing that skirt right now and the white top her mom had bought her. She checked her watch.. she had no time to stop and shop right now.. maybe later. She thought back to the last conversation they had had, and a few more before that. There wasn't even a hint of romance in them. They'd talked about movies, about travelling and painting. She'd told him how she wished she were doing something more interesting with her life than reading laws, about her secret desire to work in an ad agency. She remembered the way he smiled cheekily that time...


What indeed was so important that he asked her to take the day off and see him in a cafe?! He said he'd change her life today.. that he would show her something today..or did he say someone? He seemed in a hurry to hang up.


She smelt the faint fragrance of fresh flowers as she passed the florist. Somehow the city looked more colourful today. She looked up at the sky, it was clear and blue.. bluer than usual. Actually it was bluer in the place she looked than elsewhere. She looked closely, and noticed that it was getting even bluer there. Strange.. it was dark blue in a spot, and the blue faded outward.. then the dark blue spot started getting bigger. And bigger.. no wait, it seemed bigger because it was getting closer.


Then, she understood. From out of the sky, this thing emerged and protruded out towards her. Sort of a reverse whirlwind in the sky, with the pointy part pointing towards her. Then suddenly, the tip opened. Then it opened wider, and even wider. Then, a large three eyed monster, made of jelly flew out with outstreched tentacles, picked her up and disappeared inside the thingie. It then closed and disappeared into the sky.

8 comments:

  1. well poised, however, did not expect such an ending after the build up

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  2. :)
    sorry to disappoint you with the ending.
    but then again, the buildup was for the ending, the ending wasn't for the buildup.

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  3. I think Anticlimax is the word that can summarize the whole article :)

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  4. huh!
    something is wrong.. puli?!, gubbs!!?

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  5. Good one... And I loved the ending... slightly disjoint with the build up but leaves us open to numerous interpretations...
    Good work

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  6. The juxtaposition of the anti-climatic - not to mention inter-galactic and hyper dimensional - conclusion along with sub-contextual and not-so-subtle references towards the kafkaesque coupled with your frantic efforts to locate "Gubs" and "Puli" (who I imagine are your imaginary friends who provide you the thin but yet remarkably dependable crutch to hobble through the thin line separating sanity and stark-raving lunacy) leads me to infer you are a dope on dope.

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  8. @ Darth:
    "anti-climatic" is incorrect. you meant 'anti-climactic"

    "hyper-dimensional", "inter-galactic"..?!

    "not-so-subtle references towards the kafkaesque"..?? u probably wanted to accuse my writing of BEING kafkaesque.

    Gubbs and Puli imaginary? You risk being assaulted by close to 800 furious WIMWIans for this

    "crutch..blah blah".. you come across as someone who's hoping to out-intellectualize me by using long sentences with long words. you don't need to. this blog isn't meant to be intellectual, it's random. you have tried this before on email as well. why?!

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